To start off with is yes i would make this sacrifice but not for everybody. I would make the big sacrifice for my mom my dad but not my brother, I would sacrifice for my Grandma, my cousin Scott, and Barry and not my friends
I would sacrifice for my mom because shes the one who gave birth to me shes my mom. Also I would sacrifice for her because she’s a terrible at fighting. I would sacrifice for my Grandma because she’s like my mom she is terrible at fighting and she doesn’t move like she used to. I would sacrifice for my Cousin Scott because he is just little and he should get to live a good long life like everyone is supposed to. I would sacrifice for my cousin Taylor because she is really fun and she is apart of my family. I would sacrifice for Barry because he does allot for me, he comes to all my Baseball games last year and he comes to all my hockey games and sometimes when I need to go somewhere he is there to take me. I wouldn’t volunteer my friends because I would rather lose a friend then a family member, I know it would be bad and sad to lose a friend but not as bad as losing a family member. I wouldn’t volunteer for my dad because he can beat me up so I wouldn’t do any better than he could, well he would probably go farther in the challenge than me because he is stronger. These are all the people I would sacrifice for and why I just want to say I’m thankful for all the people I would sacrifice for!!
Nice response I like it! Just make sure that you look over spelling and the I's should be capital. You made a lot of good points in the response. It was really good and it was nice and long. I also like the opening statement. Great job!!
ReplyDeletenice response ericooo i like how you gave statements for all the people you would do it for! a couple of words are missed spelled like alot is is spelled allot in the text but other then that good job ericoo!
ReplyDeletehaha good reasos ericoo it is very well structured and i love all the reasons why u would and wouldn't sacrafice haha good job :P
ReplyDeletei like your response but you said that you would sacrifice for your dad then you said you wouldn't and you never gave a reason why you wouldn't sacrifice for your brother but other than that great response!!! :P
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