Hunger Games By: Evan Schmidt
Yes i would volunteer for the hunger game but i would only for family members like Katniess did for
her sister. The main people i would do it for is would be my sister (maybe) because she is all way
there for me some time not in the greatest mood all the time but she still is there for me. Also my
mom because they probly will not win and they are important to me and she has givin birth to me
and if it was not for her i would not be in this world and it would be alot harder to lose her then me
(even tho i would not have a good Chance ether.) But i would not do it for my dad because he is
ALOT stronger then me and better with weapons and just about everthing that you would need to
win ! and i might do it for my friends only if they were really important to me because friends mean
alot to me. Also I would also step in for my 3 grandparents because i love them and if it was not for
them my mom and dad would not be here and so then i would not be here. I would also do it for my
cousins and aunts because they are family and and i would miss them to much. but
not uncles because they are alot stronger then me like my dad and they would have alot betther
chance of wining then me. Those are most of the people i would step up for if there was a hunger
games.
Good job Evan. Ummmm One question why is it all spread out it is annoying to read.Next time please read it over once more when you are done to make sure you don't miss anything (like spelling)Other than that nice structure . Good Job
ReplyDeleteNice job Evan there were a few spelling errors but I like that you would step up for like all of your family members and the friends that mean the most to you. Nice job on the response. :)
ReplyDeleteNice response Evan but why is it spread out? You had a few spelling errors but other than that it was pretty good nice job.
ReplyDeleteevan i like your reasponse i would also sacrafice my self for my loved ones
ReplyDeletegood job on the reasponse
Evan that was pretty awesome the way you would sacrafice for all your loved ons even if you think they would hav a better chance. MAYBE you could put it together next time its hard to read it spaced out like that. Evan you should re-read your responce and check your spelling, But besids that it was AWESOME!
ReplyDeletegreat response evan i liked how you had a reason for everything, way better than mine!
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