for my 20% project i am working with Nicole Friesen and we are making a book
it is a murder mystery .we are doing the writing and she is doing the cover and illustrations .
the steps we used are “plot the story , plot the cover, plot the
illustrations , begin writing the story , begin drawing the cover,
begin to write the illustrations , finish the book , finish the cover,
finish the illustrations , type the book, add the copyright page ,
add the dedication page , add title page ,add other books page. i loved
to do this project because i think we had freedom and i don't like
being chased to get the suction place at a certain time i think this
project shows teachers they don’t have to chase us. some things that i
might want to change would be to get it done earlier so i’m not so
stressed .
For next time I would suggest that you use capitols. Also you seemed to to forget a title. For next time I would suggest that you should also add a conclusion.
ReplyDeleteYour book had a great beginning, I would really like to know how it ends! For next time you write a blog post you should work on editing, for example capitols, periods, and some commas. Also you need an interesting title.
ReplyDeletei loved you book!! great writing Nicole but i suggest you work on capitals and make it longer> Cant wait to read it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GREAT JOB ON THE BOOK
ReplyDeleteNicole, interesting post. You made a point of saying that you appreciated not being hounded to finish meet certain checkpoints along the way to the due date. This seemed to work well for you in this case, and while it is a criticism of the project from some others, there are still others like yourself you appreciated the freedom to set their own pace. With regards to the mechanics of the actual blog response here, you need to put a lot more time and energy into making sure that your post has all of the necessary conventions (spelling, punctuation, capitals, etc) so that it doesn't turn the reader off immediately. If that happens, you may miss out on sharing your insights and ideas, and potentially having an interesting discussion about the work. MrB
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